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Abandoned Dreams of Flying
With vultures, I’d gladly traverse the sky,
surrounding atmosphere so clear, so pure.
Above blue mountains, eagerly I’d fly,
but dining with vultures holds no allure!
Two butterflies take flight on dazzling wings,
in nectared frenzy, sweetly procreate.
Though watching them flying, my spirit sings,
to fly, then die, would be a tragic fate!
With ospreys, I’d fly over seas and streams;
An ocean-view nest is all I could wish.
Their seaside lifestyle haunts my dreams,
but dreams of flight don’t mean I like to fish!
Of course, I could just book an airplane flight.
On second thought, a walk would be just right!
Copyrightยฉ 2025 by Cheryl Batavia
Thank you, Cheryl, for your inspiring poem and the images that give the voice to your words!
Joanna
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Thank you, Joanna, for your kind words. Glad you enjoyed the sonnet and the photos.
Have a beautiful day! ๐
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You are more than welcome, Cheryl!
Joanna xx
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This poem beautifully captures the allure and complexity of flight, blending vivid imagery with a touch of humor and grounded wisdom. The contrasts between soaring with nature’s creatures and the practicality of human choices make it both thought-provoking and relatable. A delightful journey through the skies and back to earth!
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Thank you for sharing your insights. Your lovely comment is appreciated.๐๐น
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I love it Cheryl. Your first verse made me smile. A vulture smorgasbord would not be delightful!! Sometimes we already have what we thought we were looking for!
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Thank you, Dwight, for your perceptive comment. โค๏ธ Glad I made you smile!
I once had a painting teacher who fed bologna to the vultures in his back yard! ๐
Sometimes the things we have long dreamed of doing come true. Then we discover that dreams have both an upside and a downside.๐คฃ
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You are very welcome, my friend!
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Beautiful, Cheryl. In every way!
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Thank you so much, Paul! So happy you enjoyed the sonnet and the photos! Hope all is well with you! ๐
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A walk for you and run for me. ๐
Did you imagine dining with vultures? Haha
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Kritika, I am glad you are taking care of yourself. We both need to exercise however we are able to. ๐
I did imagine dining with vultures, but only briefly! Yuck!๐คฃ You would not believe the graphic photos I found of vultures dining! ๐คช
Hope you are doing well! ๐
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Yes, I am super excited. Will email you. ๐
๐คฃ yuck. You are funny, Cheryl ๐ . Am sure you always have fun writing these poem. ๐คญ
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I love it, Cheryl! โค๏ธ Thank you!
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Thank you, Filipa! ๐น So happy you enjoyed the post! ๐
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You’re ending is just right! ๐๐๏ธ
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I’m so happy you like the ending, Michele. I think that the closing lines are the most difficult part to write. Thank you so much for your encouraging comment! ๐๐น๐
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You’re very welcome and yes, but great fun, too. The closing line and the title which is usually the last thing I write. My pleasure, Cheryl! ๐
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Delightful images you have created, Cheryl. The closing lines are perfect. ๐
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Punam, thank you so much! ๐๐๐ I think closing lines are difficult. I rewrote these several times. I am glad you like them.๐
I hope you are well and happy! Take care.๐ฆ
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You are very welcome. ๐โค๏ธ
I am good, Cheryl. Hope you are well too. ๐บ
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Cheryl, I’m loving this poem โค๏ธYou’ve got me dreaming of flying with those gorgeous images of vultures and butterflies. And I’m totally with you on the whole airplane thing… sometimes a walk is just what we need
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It makes me happy that you enjoyed the post, Ritish. Thank you very much! โค๏ธ
I think an essential element of the joy of flying would be physical. How I envy the birds for that power and experience! Even an annoying mosquito can fly, and I cannot! ๐
The view from a plane can be inspiring, but you are a passenger…sitting passively , wearing a seatbelt, and looking out of the window. Walking allows you to choose, your own path, and it is good exercise.
I think the poem also speaks to wishes. We may have some of our dreams come true, only to discover that they have a downside.
As my late husband’s grandmother (who lived to be 102) always said,”May all of your wishes and dreams come true!” ๐ฆ๐๏ธ ๐
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Yep, birds really do have a kind of freedom we can only dream of. But can’t deny the beauty of walkingโฆ choosing our own path, feeling the ground beneath us, that’s something to think about, isn’t it? And your late husbandโs grandmother was so wise, dreams coming true is a gift, but sometimes the unexpected twists are what make the journey interesting โค๏ธโค๏ธ
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts, Ritish! Your insightful comments mean a lot to me. Have a great week! ๐
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Have a great week too, Cheryl โค๏ธ๐๐ผ
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Such a gorgeous poem, Cheryl where I find lots of hidden treasures and meaning. Oh for the gifts of a prolific poet to share dreams of tomorrow and who and how we fly.
Hugs and love my friend! ๐
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Cindy, Your kind words nudge me to try to be a little more prolific, as you certainly are! It makes me happy that you have taken the time and effort to find the hidden meanings in this poem. I am very much in your debt for your beautiful response!
Have a blissful week!
Hugs and love to you, Cindy! ๐๐น๐
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You are most kind and of course I would read behind the lines of an amazing poet riding on the edge of beauty and pain the way you do so well with insight. I do love that. I’m delighted you enjoyed my comment. ๐
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this is so pretty – it mirrors how, when I was a child, I so wanted to fly – now I see that there are many ways to glide through the world
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Thank you, da-AL for your thoughtful comment! ๐ So happy you enjoyed the poem.
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A walk. Yes. That. I rather walk to Taiwan than get on an airplane. Wish Taiwan was closer. Sigh ๐ฎโ๐จ
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Haha! ๐คฃ Though I still dream of flying, I am not dreaming of a rush to an airport, screening, checkin, being belted into a narrow seat for hours, waiting for luggage, and finding a cab! I just envy the birds their physical power to fly and their freedom to choose their own route.
I think I waited too long to try hang-gliding!๐คช
Is there a boat to Taiwan? If you visit Taiwan, eat some dim sum for me. ๐
Take care, Selma! ๐๐๐ I will think of you when I take my walk today.
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Hang gliding?! Oh no. Not me in a million years.
Dim sum. I will. ๐
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Yes, a walk does feel safe in reality. But I’ll never forget my long ago dream of gliding low and fast over the intracoastal waterway.
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JoAnna, that sounds like a spectacular journey! โค๏ธ Thank you for sharing yur thoughts!
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I liked your poem a lot. Thank you.
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Lakshmi, my pleasure. ๐ Thank you so much for your kind reply. Enjoy your weekend!
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What a beautiful poem, it’s so true when we see a majestic bird or gentle butterfly our spirit is inspired to take flight. The imagination soars.
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Thank you so much, Morag, for your beautiful comment!๐น
The flight of the spirit is essential for happiness and creativity. I agree that watching birds and butterflies flying is truly inspiring! ๐๐ฆ๐
Have a wonderful day!
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Thank you, you too.
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Cheryl, I love this beautiful poem and am so happy about the matching photos! โจ Your words paint such vivid pictures and make me feel the freedom of flight. The idea of โโtraveling with the majestic birds is fascinating, and the contrast with the delicate butterflies adds such a tender and joyful touch. I admire how you capture nature and its beauty in your words! Your poem truly touched my heart. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us! ๐ฆ๐
Stay happy and blessed, Cheryl!
Rosie from Germany
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Rosie, your lovely reply made my day! ๐ Thank you so very much!
Have a blissful day! ๐๐น๐
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This is a beautiful sonnet, Cheryl. At some points, it made me smile. I donโt like vultures. Your last line is relatable. A well crafted poem indeed ๐โค๏ธ๐
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KK, I so appreciate your thoughtful comment. Glad it made you smile! Thank you so much! ๐โค๏ธ๐ฆ
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Youโre always welcome, Cheryl ๐โค๏ธ๐
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