Sweet Nothings
Sugar sprinkle stars
in dark chocolate skies; we
whisper sweet nothings.
Reprinted from Wonders
Copyright© 2018 by Cheryl Batavia
Sweet Nothings
Sugar sprinkle stars
in dark chocolate skies; we
whisper sweet nothings.
Reprinted from Wonders
Copyright© 2018 by Cheryl Batavia
Gulf Coast Poet 
Dark chocolate is the only kind I eat. Sweet nothing whispers and starlight would make it perfect!
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JoAnna, Thank you for your lovely comment. ❤ I am glad to know a fellow chocoholic! 🙂
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ahhhh
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Kate, thank you for taking time to read and comment. ❤ I am glad you enjoyed the haiku. Take care, Cheryl
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really delightful Cheryl, have a good weekend!
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Awww…This is a lovely piece Cheryl! 💖💖
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Thank you, Offshorewriter for your kind comments! ❤ I am glad you enjoyed the poem. Have a great weekend! Cheryl
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Beautiful poem!
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Thank you, D, for your kind comment. ❤ I am happy that you liked the poem. Have a great weekend! Cheryl
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Of course! You too!
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Dark chocolate is best enjoyed on its own, but you made sugar sprinkling on dark chocolate feel good 🙂
Somehow reminded me of the college years, that magical period of dusk before the pitch dark of night, and the hurried sweet nothings exchanged between the lovebirds before the student hostel gates closed ☺️
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Deb, thank you for sharing your thoughts about the college years…you made me laugh out loud! Good to know you are a fellow chocoholic! Your kind comments about the poem are greatly appreciated! ❤ Have a wonderful weekend! Cheryl
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These lines are sweet
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Kinge, it’s so sweet of you to say so! 🙂 Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. Have a wonderful weekend! Cheryl
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Welcome Cheryl🙂. Have a good weekend
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Love this one.
Your imagination is just amazing.
Have a great day Cheryl 🙂
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Thank you so much, Ritish, for your kind comments. ❤ I deeply appreciate your taking time to read and comment. Have a great day also! Cheryl
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Dark chocolate, sugar sprinkles and your love… perfect recipe for heavenly intoxication. Lovely haiku Cheryl ❤️
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Cheryl, such a deliciously delightful haiku!
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Punam, Thank you for your lovely comment. ❤ So glad you liked the poem. Have a great day! Cheryl
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My pleasure!❤️
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This post reminded me more of food rather than human love! Life of a foodie is so difficult.. Anything u give we relate to our love of life – food! Loved it~♥~
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Harini, Thank you for your thoughtful comments. If it’s any consolation, I can’t eat sugar, just stevia-sweetened chocolate.The intention of the poem was to say how sweet love is, not to sabotage you! ❤ Glad you enjoyed the poem. All the best! Cheryl
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Dark chocolate skies. Wow, Oh why never I thought of that! Very sweet haiku, Cheryl❤
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Thank you, Jay, for your lovely comment. ❤ Glad you liked the haiku. Have a great weekend! Cheryl
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Love this Haiku Cheryl!!! I will be looking at the sky a little differnt these days and wanting chocolate for sure. Wait, was that from wonders or did you write it? Happy Saturday! ❤️
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Thank you Cindy, for your kind response. Yes, I did write the poem. Wonders is one of 5 books of poetry that I have published. For more information, click “Books” on the menu. If you are on a computer, the menu is to the left. You will find excerpts from my books on the menu as well.
I hope you will not experience any power outages. Take care, and Happy Saturday to you! Cheryl ❤
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You are so welcome Cheryl!!! That is so cool!! Somehow I missed that piece and I sure will! I do see you quote them often and I didn’t realize that was actually you! LOVE THIS! I will look at your book tab! We’re all good here and I hope with you as well! ❤️ Cindy
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Thank you, Eliza, for your kind comment. I am glad you enjoyed the poem. Take care, Cheryl ❤
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Simply amazing! ❤
You've sure got a great imagination!
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Thank you, Silver Stone, for your kind response. I am so happy you liked the poem. 🙂 All the best! Cheryl
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You’re very welcome, Cheryl! 😄
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Your poem , Cheryl, is tasty ! This is better than looking at the moon ! 🙂
Love ❤
Michel
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Michel, Thank you for the lovely comments. I am so glad you liked the haiku. 🙂 I suspect you are a fellow chocoholic!
Love, Cheryl ❤
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Yes , I was , Cheryl, but now I have to take care of my diet! 🙂
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Beautiful and heartwarming! Chocolate always makes my heart melt. ✨❤️
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Rishika, Thank you for your delightful response. Another fellow chocoholic! ❤ Mine is stevia-sweetened these days, but still delicious. 🙂 Enjoy your chocolate in good health! Cheryl
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I would say, scrumptious haiku💖😊 very beautifully crafted. Chocolate, sugar sprinkles and sky, wow what an imagination Cheryl! I would always be looking for them whenever I see the sky🙂❤️
Take care 🌺
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Thank you, Samreen, thank you for your delightful response. 🙂 You made my day! ❤ All the best! Cheryl
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Pleasure is all mine 🤗 take care 💖❤️
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Creative and imaginative 👍
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Athira, thank you for dropping by and reading my poems. I appreciate your kind comment. ❤ Have a great day! Cheryl
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Thanks a lot. Have a great day ahead 🙂
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Wow..lovely piece, Cheryl.
Hope you are doing well.
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Thank you so much, Murali, for your generous comment! I am glad you liked the haiku. Are you a chocoholic too? 🙂
I am doing well. Thank you for asking. I hope things are going well for you. ❤ Cheryl
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This poem really made me think. Are the stars and the skies whispering to each other? Are they whispering to the people watching them? Are the people whispering to reach other?
So much mystery in a few will written lines. 😊
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Thank you so much, Hamish, for sharing your reflections. So glad you enjoyed the haiku! ❤ All the best! Cheryl
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